Row row row your boat
the journeys' half done
the morning is yet to come
still time for the rising sun
Dark doubts cloud over the horizon
a trace of fear, a hint of uncertainity
add more meaning to the black eternity
But all these fade away
no more with the wind you sway
when you conjure up an iron will
and push like hell towards the distant hill
So you row row row your boat
the journeys' half done
the morning is yet to come
still time for the rising sun
In the pitch black darkness you see clearly
the green grass the dotted trees
the temple on the hill and the monkeys
on the beach kids play and scream
all vividly in your dream
Your doubts were mistaken, you realise
you'll always have good company
never did you think you'll come this far
but just look up, theres always with you the northern star
So you row row row your boat
the journeys' half done
the morning is yet to come
still time for the rising sun
Is this what the Comp Arch assignment did to you !! That said, a very nice write up - especially the optimism that it brings in with the reference of 'northern star', an excellent usage !
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@Mighty Titan
ReplyDeleteThanks! That reminds me.. comp arch project! Enough of this poem buisness, gotta get right back to studies ;)
Nice!
ReplyDeleteNicely penned!
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So you row row row your boat
the journeys' half done
the morning is yet to come
still time for the rising sun
Reflects positive state of mind and also imbues the minds of the readers with the same! :)
@Swarna Thanks !!
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